When I was four years old I went to the Christchurch zoo with my mum and my dad and my sister. It was a scary day.
It all happened in the middle of the zoo. We had been looking around for a while and I wanted an iceblock. There was an ice-cream truck but it was closed so I went to watch the tigers. There was a man chucking food to the tigers and I had my hands on the bars. While I was watching them I saw another guy wearing blue clothes walk to the ice-cream truck and I thought he was an ice-cream man so I watched him. I wasn’t watching the tigers but I still had my hands on the bars. Suddenly a tiger scratched my arm and it started to bleed. It felt painful and I cried when my dad was cleaning it. That day I learnt not to touch the bars and I still have the scars to remind me.
By C.H
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CH, I know you worked really hard to produce this piece of work. I like the way you have put all the events in sequential order. Next time I think it would be great if you used more exciting verbs. I like the way you added your feelings into the work.
Wow…what an interesting story to share.
You were very lucky that you only have a few scars. I can see them in the photo. It must have been very painful.
Thankyou for sharing such a scarey experience.:)
What a fantastic story! Thanks for sharing it with us – I could imagine you at the zoo because you told your story in order and told us about how you felt. Ka Pai! 
Cooooooooooool as that would be qute scary. but it was awesome.
outstanding that was so cool can you please post another story like that you are so talented you could write a whole paper and still write more.
please write more
ac
wow that must have been cool but scary at the same time!
WoW!
That must have REALLY hurt!
I hope it didn’t hurt 2 much tho!
I hope is it ok now!
GC!
Thank you for sharing your experince with us
I think it is a very interesting story and I thought it would be very scary.
well that must have been scary hmm i just wondering did you get your iceblock.How long were in hospatial
Wow CH I bet it hruts Francisco Karen: wow that sould hrut CH.
That must really hurt and i no how you feel i experienced somthing like that before!
I hope you are Ok after that. I ope I never do that or my sister or brother.
thanks guys for the comment
mrs t
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